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Friday, August 12, 2022

Agent Query for MOURNING DOVE, a Family-Saga Genre, Eco-Fiction Novel

Dear <FirstNameOfAgent>,

I want you to represent me because you work in the YA genre and appear to love young people. Ballantine Books published a short novel I wrote and it sold 25,000 copies. My agent was Kirby McCauley, now deceased, who also represented Stephen King and George R.R. Martin. MOURNING DOVE is a Young Adult novel complete at 81,000 words. Targeted readers are young people who wonder, "Will climate change be so bad that I shouldn't even have children? What will it do to them, or maybe even me?" MOURNING DOVE answers those questions. It is about a family of post-apocalypse climate scientists, dreamers, and sharpshooters that travels from Alaska to Antarctica to join family rebuilding civilization. In following their journey, readers feel how challenging their own lives will be.

Witnessing his sister's murder triggers Ttuuee Darlton to come of age as a diamond, sparkling and hard, with fiery humor, a big agenda, clear goals, and drive. As MOURNING DOVE's hero leading the family, his experiences include hugging a Brazilian witch (anti-hero) who wears nothing but body paint as she sobs in his arms regretting being born evil. He falls asleep listening for his deathly ill father's last breath, until he's awakened by Dad laughing how his fever has broken. Ocean mist cools Ttuuee's face as he watches pirates who attacked flee in their damaged ship. He forces an evil queen (a cousin) to remove handcuffs from Dad's wrists. Ttuuee sees the apocalypse brought back witches, pirates, and evil queens, plus much death and disease, but because he is confident civilization will recover, Ttuuee places his great, great grandmother's billion-dollar engagement ring onto the finger of the Rembrandt girl, a Lakota composer of symphonies.

Like Bruce Holsinger's DISPLACEMENTS, MOURNING DOVE shows how parents and children suffer from climate change. I tried to make MOURNING DOVE present similar feelings but in a lighter manner. I learned from Paolo Bacigalupi's mastery at characterization by reading WATER KNIFE, a novel of heroes and anti-heroes who struggle through climate-caused drought. I was inspired to write MOURNING DOVE by climate scientist Dr. James E. Hansen and his book STORMS OF MY GRANDCHILDREN, which tells why the climate will change and how his grandchildren and others their age can save humanity.

As a U.S. Senate ghostwriter, I wrote op-eds for major newspapers. Articles under my name are in national journals, including Nature Conservancy Magazine and the American Psychological Association Monitor. My published novella, "Oceans Away" was nearly fifty percent of STELLAR SHORT NOVELS, edited by Judy-Lynn del Rey. I studied writing with my master's thesis professor, novelist J.R. Salamanca. I participated for years in the "Vicious Circle" workshop led by Amazing and Fantastic editor Ted White, for whom I also read slush. I taught myself climate science. I personally coded and built an author website and a climate-novel blog recognized by activists and scientists. A private high school's administrators, impressed with my blog, brought me in to teach what climate change will do and how to write about it. I connected with more than 66,000 potential readers on social media, some famous. I performed in six podcasts. I plan to do far more to market MOURNING DOVE. I will not self-publish.

<FirstNameOfAgent> please tell me you would like to add MOURNING DOVE to your winter reading list. This is a multiple submission. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Richard Shawn Weinstein, SFWA member      
Writing as Shawn Oueinsteen
www.shawnoueinsteen.com
mourningdovenovel.blogspot.com 

 P.S., Disclosure: The first chapter includes deaths of immediate family of the two Point-of-View main characters. Then MOURNING DOVE's first PoV character, Jen, dies on page 97. These deaths may make readers cry, but to me the joy of reading comes from books that bring out tears, as well as smiles, laughter, and hope.


Sunday, January 19, 2020

Climate Books

UPDATED

As research for writing the novel MOURNING DOVE, I’ve read more than 75 books related to global warming. To see the books I read and my comments about them, go to my  Climate Books web page. Clicking on a book's picture will take you to a page where you can buy it. (I don't make any money out of it. The more people read about global warming, the better off we will all be.)

Please help me in my personal war against global warming. Friend me on Facebook, Follow me on Twitter, and connect with me on LinkedIn. I am writing a powerful global warming novel. I need a great publishing company to market it and print a lot of copies. Publishers look at an author's social media numbers as a sign of potential buyers. So please Friend me, Follow me, and Connect with me. Consider it as doing a small part in saving humanity from the ravages of global warming. Thanks.

Shawn Oueinsteen       
www.shawnouinsteen.com
mourningdovenovel.blogspot.com 



Sunday, March 31, 2019

Agent Query, Version 1, for MOURNING DOVE

MOURNING DOVE is 81,000 words. Inspired by Abraham Lincoln’s apocryphal quote to Harriett Beecher Stowe, I wrote it to be the little novel that starts the great war against global warming. I am sending this to you because you represent X, whom I admire, and you ask for Y on your #MSWL.

Jen, sleeping, sensed that Mom entered her room, bent over her, and kissed her cheek. Jen loved it when her mother woke her this way.
“G’morning, Honey,” Mom said. “It’s our last launch day. We have to talk. You turn sixteen tomorrow and you've never experienced friends your age, especially someone who makes your heart flutter. That's not right for a teen. I need you to persuade Grams. You're the only one who might be able to convince her to leave with us. And even if she refuses, we’re flying to our family and civilization in Antarctica without her and Grandpa. You've got to be my partner in this. If anything goes wrong, it could be very dangerous, with people trying to kill us. But we have to do it. Are you in? Can I count on you?”
“Mom. Of course you can. I’m in. It will be my mission, from almost sixteen onward.”
Mom put her arms around Jen and hugged her close. It felt good.
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A flash snowstorm coated the ground seconds before liftoff. Jen and Grandpa in the command bunker followed the take-off on live video. When the rocket left the camera’s view, she watched another video feed showing her older brother, Fred, at the outdoor weather station. He bent over backward as he tracked the flight. Suddenly, both legs flew out from under him. Their launch center was on top of a mountain. He was on a narrow asphalt path, overlooking a steep drop, and the blacktop was slippery. Mom, suddenly in the picture, reached for Fred to keep him from going over the cliff. But as she grabbed him she lost her footing, too, and they both slid over the edge clutching each other. On a speaker somewhere, she heard her mother scream. Seeing the empty cliff, Jen shouted, “No! Mommie! Come back. I need you. Mommie!” Grandpa wrapped Jen in his arms.
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At the funeral, Dad turned a wheel that gently lowered Mom’s coffin into her grave. Watching, Jen said, almost out loud, Mom, I won’t let you down.

Ballantine Books published my novella "Oceans Away" in Stellar Short Novels. I ghosted for Senator Paula Hawkins, and my op-eds appeared, under her name, throughout the United States. I've spoken about climate and MOURNING DOVE on 5 podcasts so far, as well as to a high school, and I will be featured in a Netflix climate documentary. On FacebookTwitter, and LinkedIn, I have 65,000 connections following MOURNING DOVE. I expect cover blurbs from the most famous of these. My author page has had 100,000 hits and my blog 10,000. My day job is Beltway bandit wordslinger. I'm submitting this query to multiple agencies. Thank you for your time and consideration.